WALT write a timed recount about a time when we did something special with our whanau or family.
· when and where you did something special
· who was with you
· what you did (think about the order you did things)
· how you felt and why you felt this way.
By Harrison Jones
Once I went to the beach with my mum and friends. The beach was sparkly like crystals. Me and my friends and mum all went to a restaurant.
You need to add more details to make it clear exactly where you went and what you did.
Where was the beach? Who were your friends? What did you do at the beach?